That's charming, altariel. Thank you for pointing to it. The picture of Denethor's difficulties made me smile without turning him into just a figure of fun, and I liked Finduilas' strength. A nice PoV, and an almost-throwaway last sentence that would steal many other a show. Certainly not an "ordinary tale". :-)
Hey, thanks for reading it! :) I'm glad you liked it. I did have an awful fun tormenting the poor man, but he shouldn't have tried to fit his proposal into his busy schedule. Finduilas became more and more evil the more I wrote.
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Date: 2003-04-13 02:48 am (UTC)That's charming, altariel. Thank you for pointing to it. The picture of Denethor's difficulties made me smile without turning him into just a figure of fun, and I liked Finduilas' strength. A nice PoV, and an almost-throwaway last sentence that would steal many other a show. Certainly not an "ordinary tale". :-)
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Date: 2003-04-13 06:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-04-13 06:30 am (UTC)