Looks good. There was no doubt that I would be picking it up, but the last few Cardassian stories have been particularly unreadable, and this one looks to be not that way.
Damn *g*. I forswore buying Star Trek books years ago and now you've just made me put one on my Must Read list. That was seriously good. The impression of a ruined society struggling to rebuild was wonderfully conveyed. Many congrats.
I like the way that your story moves up and down the layers of - how can express it - externality and internality? If you see what I mean. The way his narrative slides from being extrovert and sociable to being introspective and secret.
I would love to claim that was intentional. It's very like the character - ostensibly sociable, but that's mostly a front for a very intense and hidden inner life (or am I just writing him as an INFJ...? *g*). He's made of secrets and lies.
*Tempted to squee like a fangirl* Congratulations! What a wonderfully controlled and atmospheric piece of writing, and most deserving of having your name in big letters on the cover! I'm so pleased for you.
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Date: 2004-03-19 10:55 am (UTC)Congratulations - go you!
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Date: 2004-03-24 01:42 pm (UTC)*whispers* I keep looking at the front cover and squeeing when I see my name... ;-)