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Foreword
Prologue: Concerning Hobbits
Chapter I: Hands of a Healer
Chapter II: The Mind and Its Policies
Chapter III: Falls the Shadow
Chapter IV: The Next Debate
Chapter V: Treason and Plot
Chapter VI: Lost Souls

Epilogue: This is the Way

Barahir could never bear to watch another read his work.

Slowly he paced the chamber, tidied the desk, picked up scrolls and set them down again, worried his pen – all the while with his back to the old man, who sat in his chair and read. No sound came from him beyond a rustle now and again as, one by one, he set leaf after leaf upon each other.

“A fine account,” said his grandsire at last. “Very fine.”

Barahir turned. The Steward stacked the papers tidily between his gnarled old hands, hand that had wielded swords, signed warrants, written history.

“Of course,” Faramir said, “it cannot leave this room.”

“Sir?”

The old man placed the papers down upon the desk. “Tell me, Barahir, what purpose does your history serve? What purpose, do you think, that any history serve?”

“’Tis a true account, sir—”

“True? And to what end?”

To that, Barahir had no answer. Helplessly, he held out his hands. The old man watched; fierce, judging, kindly.

“Look around you,” the Steward said. “Look at the records held here. Who comes to this room?”

“Only you and I, sir.” That was why they used it, for the peace.

“Only you and I. And what is there to draw men here, Barahir?” He gestured around them at the shelves and the scrolls that lay upon them. “What can be gleaned from all of this? The pay of the masons that built the White Tower? The cost of a loaf of bread in the days before the Kin-Strife? These may be truths, Barahir, but they are not history.”

Slowly, Barahir took up his papers. He held them lightly between both hands. Written now. Should it be unmade? Haltingly, but loyal, he said, “What would you have me do with it, sir? Ought I to cast it on the fire?”

“That would be a drastic measure.”

“Was I wrong to set it down?”

“I think not.”

“Then what is to be done with it?”

Again the old man gestured around them. “Let it be. Leave it. Leave them their kings and captains, the faithful and the faithless. Let them believe the old world burned and a new one rose from the ashes. Let it rest, Barahir. For now. Other men will want the tale – in time.”

And thus it was – although Barahir wondered, as he set a seal upon the work and consigned it to the shelf – what kind of men they would be, who did not desire heroes, who would see only the faults and flaws of others and not their virtue, as if this were some greater truth. For surely the way lies in between. Men are neither good nor evil, but are at once faithless and faithful, hopeless and hopeful, pitiless and pitiful.

Appendix A: The Sources

Date: 2010-09-09 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
A truly outstanding story and one I've long wanted to read,the what if Denethor had lived.Tolkien himself could not have told the tale better.

Date: 2010-09-09 08:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
Thank you very much, that's a lovely review to get. I'm very pleased that the story worked for you.

I have another (very different) "Denethor lives" AU here.

Date: 2010-09-10 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
I was even inspired to write a drabble by it,which I posted on my LJ!I love your Aragorn and Faramir and Denethor is very in character.I cannot imagine him as Aragorn's Steward.

Date: 2010-09-14 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
I've been away for a few days, but I'll go and read your drabble now. I have difficulty imagining Denethor as Aragorn's Steward too.

Date: 2010-09-09 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lanoger.livejournal.com
That was...whew. I was going to say tragic but that isn’t quite the right word.

They all knew they were looking at civil war if Denethor blocked the kingship, considering Gondorian troops had already ridden to war under the banner of the King. But Denethor was never going roll over for Aragorn, not in a legal challenge and not in a military one, certainly not if he came charging in with Dol Amroth on one side and Rohan on the other.

But oh, Denethor. He did have to go out in the most dramatically symbolic way possible, didn't he.

Date: 2010-09-09 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
Thank you. Reviews are hugely appreciated.

It's a terrible bind that Denethor finds himself in. He genuinely doesn't believe the claim is really legal, but the consensus is against him, and his overwhelming sense of guilt over the pyre doesn't help. Nor does the fact that Faramir longs to serve a different kind of lord. But, no, he doesn't exactly go gentle into that good night.

Date: 2010-09-10 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phyloxena.livejournal.com
This is a wrenching story. Same result through much more distress, heartbreak and lasting fever (ITB, outside of gentle paternal care, Faramir recovered much faster) - essential Denethor. I particularly liked the clipped tone and seemingly artless language of the story, it somehow reminds me of the "Children of Hurin" and confirms the claim of the outline, the unfinished work never meant for general public's education.

Through I do wonder who are these people who would want their heroes faulty and devoid of virtue.

Date: 2010-09-15 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
Sorry it's taken me a few days to respond: I was away for a long weekend and I'm just catching up. I'm very glad that you found this an effective story. (And particularly satisfied that you spotted the longer-lasting fever!)

Through I do wonder who are these people who would want their heroes faulty and devoid of virtue.

The attraction of the anti-hero...

Date: 2010-09-10 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clodia-metelli.livejournal.com
This is stunning: so beautifully written, so true to all the characters, and so carefully played out! Fantastic and tragic (Denethor) and inspiring (Faramir, and Aragorn's trust, and Eowyn, who cannot be held against her will). Thank you for writing it and for sharing!

Date: 2010-09-14 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
so carefully played out!

It's good to know that all my tiny incremental bursts of writing paid off! Thank you so much for such a lovely review, my pleasure to write and share.

Date: 2010-09-12 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wormwood-7.livejournal.com
An exquisitely told story. The portrayal of Denethor was particularly memorable.
Thank you for sharing it :)

Date: 2010-09-13 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
My pleasure :-) Thank you for reading and for letting me know you liked it.

Date: 2010-09-27 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rakshathedemon.livejournal.com
A lovely story; believable and textured. Faramir is particularly well-done here; and Aragorn. I was so pleased that Faramir made his choice (and a choice both awesome and sad) to give allegiance to Aragorn as king before he learned how his father had tried to kill him. And I loved Denethor's farewell to Eowyn.

A brilliant AU!

Date: 2010-09-28 08:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
Thank you, Raksha, I'm really glad you liked it! :-)

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