Road to nowhere

[altariel]

I know that word-counting is a pretty artificial way of measuring progress but, really, after three hours of reconstructing, paragraph shuffling, and damn hard thinking, I'd still like to see more of a net gain than 28 words. This post is longer.

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[altariel.livejournal.com]

Boy are you right. Well, to be fair, it was a good three hours work. I'm a lot clearer about what has to go in the spaces now.