altariel: (Default)
[personal profile] altariel
Happy birthday, Dwimordene! I hope you have a lovely day and a smashing year.

Your birthday drabble request: "I realize that it can be tough to write an AU in only 100 words, but for my birthday, I'd like to see you give it a shot."

So here you go, a little piece of birthday cheer!

The Power Behind the Throne

Taking it had been a kindness. The Ring-bearer had struggled at first but had soon become peaceful. That peace had settled upon all Gondor now, like frost.

With the bridge retaken, his father was ready to hear his counsel, and the new king too listened when he told him how he might win their war. The South and the East – and the North – paid homage to the West. Everyone listened, now.

But the White Tree did not blossom here, nor could the winter sun warm all of the new-laid marble and stone. This was not Minas Anor, as of old.

Date: 2008-05-27 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katlinel.livejournal.com
I'm probably just repeating everyone else, but the peace/frost line is brilliantly chilling and very unsettling. You've truly conveyed the AU in the 100 words.

I also like the line 'Everyone listened, now.' How tempting that must have been! It sounds very much like the dark side of the INFJ? Do you read Faramir as INFJ?

The last paragraph also makes me think of Narnia - always winter and never Christmas.

Date: 2008-05-28 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com
Ooh, I hadn't thought of Narnia, but that's quite right, isn't it? Frosted steel!

I do indeed read Faramir as INFJ (all that 'reading the hearts of men'), and this is definitely 'When INFJs Go Bad'. I'm glad you liked it :-)

Profile

altariel: (Default)
altariel

September 2018

S M T W T F S
      1
2345678
9101112131415
16171819202122
23242526272829
30      

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated May. 27th, 2025 06:20 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios