I'm probably just repeating everyone else, but the peace/frost line is brilliantly chilling and very unsettling. You've truly conveyed the AU in the 100 words.
I also like the line 'Everyone listened, now.' How tempting that must have been! It sounds very much like the dark side of the INFJ? Do you read Faramir as INFJ?
The last paragraph also makes me think of Narnia - always winter and never Christmas.
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Date: 2008-05-27 07:50 pm (UTC)I also like the line 'Everyone listened, now.' How tempting that must have been! It sounds very much like the dark side of the INFJ? Do you read Faramir as INFJ?
The last paragraph also makes me think of Narnia - always winter and never Christmas.